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Passions by Cam T. '13

(No, not that kind)

January 1, 2010

Edit: Aww, shoot! I wrote you all this blog post last night, before I left the house, and then forgot to publish it. Well, here it is, a year late. And now, to hit the road for Vermont. Hope this helps with those last-minute applications, though.

Hola!

The title and mini-description attached to this post may have, despite my best efforts, given some of you a clue as to what this post will be about. Anybody who read my last post might also know, as I gave away some spoilers.

Brought to you just in time for 2010 (think about it — the writing of this post spanned almost TWO YEARS. I should get a raise for that), it’s Cam’s thoughts on the college essay process!

Huzzah!

Three Saturdays ago, I was walking through a far-too-familiar part of campus with my friend Kevin. (Coincidentally, my brother is also named Kevin. Relevant to you? Nope, but you read it anyways. Congratulations, you’re procrastinating. Stop procrastinating and skip ahead to the college-relevant material, you slacker.) (Did the previous run-on aside cause you to forget what I was talking about? Good! Some mental exercise for you and literary laziness for me.) Because this year Kevin, a friend from my high school, is like many of you — e.g. prefrosh material — we were talking about the college essay process.

For many people at my school, and many other people I knew, the college essay process was Not Fun. I can certainly agree with that when looking at the volume of work most high school seniors get themselves into — e.g. the paperwork starts to ascend its usual two dimensions and acquire volume, because, well, there’s a lot of it. Or, the electronic bits storing your apps start to acquire volume, but …. hey, stop questioning my word usage.

The other reason many people found the college essay to be Not Fun, though, and the reason I want to waste your time with here, was that “they hated writing about themselves.”

Kevin and I, walking somewhere on campus, came to perhaps a far-too-hasty conclusion: that’s stupid.

We stopped (conversationally, that is), realized that might be not quite what we meant, and tried to describe what we actually meant.

See, here’s the thing — the revolutionary bit — what those people don’t know is that the college essay should be *fun*. (eww, I sound like a guidance counselor… I promise, I’m still only one year past all y’alls) (Yep, I’m from Massachusetts, and I say that sometimes, mostly for kicks. People get angry at me for it) The college essay is a lot of work, but the work should not be bad; the reason behind that is fairly simple. You get to write about yourself! You’re not being self-centered, you’re not facing a yawning audience; you’re trying to show people the best parts about you! Now, granted, some people with low self-esteem might not like writing about themselves, but here’s the cool bit: they’re not asking you to write about your faults! They want the best of you. The college essay is the time to shamelessly (but truthfully — start lying and you’ll run into trouble, so please please please don’t do it?) put your best foot forward and talk about you, the bits of you that you like most and that define you. That should be fun. If there’s something about you that you wouldn’t enjoy sharing with other people, then perhaps you shouldn’t put it on your college application — think first for a second about why you don’t enjoy it.

It’s more than that, though; it’s not just writing about yourself. It’s writing about your passions, your hobbies, your interests and your real drive; give them the reason you get up in the morning, give them the reason you stay up late, and give them the reason you like being you! Or if there’s something in your life you want to change, give them that! The college essay, at least for most prompts (disclaimer: I haven’t looked at any, this year, including MIT’s >_<), is fairly flexible, because it’s designed to let you shine through, not just an essay.

And are you ready for the best part?

No matter what you write, your audience has to read it!* They get paid to read your college essay! Hah! And don’t think it’s minimum wage — just the other day, I was talking with Matt in the admissions office about which new Ferrari he’s going to buy.** See, these people get money (cash, bills, dough!) to read YOUR essay about YOU.

So why give them anything less?

*I think so. Unless you don’t write it, anyway.
**I’m making this up. However, Matt, if it were true that you can afford a Ferrari and are purchasing one, why haven’t you offered me rides yet?

The college essay is your chance to shine; it’s a lot of work, but it’s where you’re supposed to show people everything you’re proud of, and everything you’ve worked for; if you’ve worked for things you care about, that should be a whole lot of fun. So procrastinators and re-writers alike (or anybody else still writing a college essay this year), go for it! You have till sometime tomorrow (check Matt’s post for the details) to get your essays in. Go make ’em great.

Err, disclaimer: Despite being employed by MIT Admissions, I know very little about the college essay and how it’s evaluated. This is just my take on it. And Kevin’s. Don’t take it as the official word of the admissions office, please; take it as one student’s blogular ramblings. (Also, good luck in March, everybody!)

Have a happy 2010, and stop worrying about college so much — go enjoy the rest of your senior year.

That’s all, folks.
-Cam

27 responses to “Passions”

  1. Brad says:

    You’re right Cam. When I was writing my essays they didn’t really seem like an overall challenge. It just kind of flowed, granted there were grammar problems the first draft XD . Although, it would have been nice if you posted this last night >_> cause I literally only just submitted my part 2 >_You’re right Cam. When I was writing my essays they didn’t really seem like an overall challenge. It just kind of flowed, granted there were grammar problems the first draft XD . Although, it would have been nice if you posted this last night >_> cause I literally only just submitted my part 2 >_< . Well goodluck to you procrastinators! Happy New Year and here’s to seeing you at MIT in 2010!! Class of 2014.

  2. hi Cam! may i ask a question here?
    well i think i can………….

    i mailed the teacher evaluations and secondary school report to MIT admission office last week. but the online application tracking shows that teacher evaluations are possessed while the secondary school report is not. i don’t noe why cuz i mailed them together. should i mail the school report again? but i don’t think i can make it before deadline……….

  3. Brad says:

    @Gio
    lol i beat you to it mate. Did you finish up your application and submit already?

  4. Brad says:

    @Huang
    I shipped all of my stuff off via FedEx and only my Evals have been processed so far. They addressed this somewhere already. The admissions board said that if you sent all your items together but you see some as processed and others as not, don’t worry about it becase they don’t process everything together, wait a little while and see. The admissions office is closed till Jan 4th. Give it a week.

  5. JB '13 says:

    Happy New Year Cam! Good luck on those essays everyone!

  6. I don’t know how it’s said in Massachusetts, but I’ve never heard anyone put and “s” on y’all (unless it’s possessive)

    sorry that was a completely useless comment
    grin

  7. Anonymous says:

    Hey.. wish you all a very happy new year!! and great post Cam!!:)

  8. Darx says:

    Happy new year and good luck to everyone who applied to MIT this year (including me:)). Nice post, but maybe little too late :D

  9. Jenny says:

    Great post, Keep roaring on, Cam!!!

    You’re doing reall(l)y great and your college career is already progressing really fast…

    You are like one of the “old” MIT guys, now.

    You do stand out!! And I am one of your fans!!

  10. anon says:

    Proper usage is “one year past y’all.”

  11. Parthivi says:

    @ cam
    You are absolutely correct .The words just flowed in like a brooke handling each and every endeavour.
    Thanx coz I havent yet submitted my app. part2,but eventualy, I will submit it nw.

    And Happy New Year 2010!!!!

  12. Dan L. '14 says:

    Aww,

    I just submitted my application this morning….
    well part 2 that is,
    i don’t think there’s nothing i need to change (not that i can anyways)

    HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!

  13. W says:

    Ah…The schizophrenic writing style…
    I’ll definately need that in my essays…

  14. Anonymous says:

    I just wanted to say that I just submitted my application (with the help of this blog post).

    And it was about 3.3 hours early.

  15. Anonymous says:

    I submitted 25 minutes before the deadline…

    Now I can die a happy man – I applied to MIT.

  16. Kierra says:

    Thanks for the encouraging words, it was definitely fun to read. smile

  17. anon says:

    Hey
    I did submit my app.part2 exactly 10 hes b4.

  18. anon says:

    Hey
    I did submit my app.part2 exactly 10 hrs b4.

  19. Oce says:

    Lol @ Anonymous above (12.51PM). I feel the same – applying to MIT is an affirmative achievement in itself.

  20. Kevin K. says:

    Michelle and I like the post wink

  21. tree says:

    hmmm.. Queer writing style(no negative connos)…stream of consciousness?

    Anyways, the college-essay-should-be-fun part is true… (submitted a very long short-of-irrelevant story just to torture the already tortured Admissions of certain school:) That was fun.

  22. Cam says:

    @Huang: Yeah, what Brad said. Don’t worry about it, they mostly care that the part under your control (e.g. the app itself — part 2) is submitted on time.

    @west texas fellow: Ah, sweet! I can earn equal enmity for my usage all around the US, then. *I* still like it.

    @Jenny, anonymous: Thanks!

    @W, other anonymous: What!? I don’t have schizophrenia.

    @Kevin: Yeah, YOU WOULD. Come to the friendly toast this week, ya hear?

  23. Parthivi says:

    Cam,
    If you dont mind ,I have a question….

    I mailed the teacher evaluations and secondary school report to MIT admission office last to last week, but the online application tracking shows that none has been possessed. So ,shall I send all of them again or wait until they ask………….or else what shall I do?

  24. Rose says:

    @ tree

    …cheeky wink

  25. makesense says:

    Blog post recommendation:

    FRC Breakaway!!!